I also asked multiple friends for feed back but here’s me asking Giovanna on what she thinks .She also has media studies but she goes to a different school sadly. Hey guys Back at it again with another blog. This time, i’ve never done this before, but here’s a peer review. I know some of you are confused but a peer review is basically when you have a friend or a random person go over the work you’ve created or completed. However the feedback is both good and what needs to be worked on. For example, I had my friends Franshesca give feedback on what needs to be worked on. Of course I wasn’t suprised on her mentioning on the camera angles. We do need to finish editing that into our new redo. OBVIOUSLY our credentials still aren’t done since we haven’t had time to talk about who’s taking what position and the formatting of where to put them. Moving onto the good parts, she mentioned our editing. I was definitely surprised because we still need some fixing to do. I would also love to have a...
I’m tired. Hi fans! Back at it again with another blog yay.Through this journey I have definitely learned a lot of lessons and skills. I’ve leaned to keep my phone charge, research before taking action, look at examples and how to edit and plan ahead. This won’t be my last timing talking to you guys but it will be my last time talking about my commercial. Next blog, drum roll please….. YOULL WATCH MY COMMERCIAL!Im so excited. Through all the editing and days spent, it was definitely difficult but a lesson. My final times editing the commercial, I just tweaked up some special effects. I added transitions per photo,made sure the music aligned, and added some color over the filters. In doing this, my commercial looks well planned and put together. Here’s a sneak peak of the first picture used. I might change it if last minute I find a better one. Tada! If I haven’t mentioned before, I LOVE stuffed animals. I still sleep surrounded by them all over my bed and room. So this pict...
Location of scene: Sasha's room Sasha:*puts headphones on to block out her parents arguing* Mary (the mom): "i'm going to the grocery story" Sasha: "okay bye love you" Location of scene: The houses living room Sasha: *her jaw drops* Narrator: Honey your mom is dead Location of scene: Sasha's room Sasha: *crying and staring out the window* Sasha: she yells at her dad "i wish you were the one who died" Location of scene: Her parents room Sasha: *going through her moms old stuff * Sasha: *finds one of her moms necklaces* Location of scene: At the park Sasha: "i just want her back" Sasha: "i don't know i have a feeling she's not dead" Location of scene: Her kitchen Sasha: *making herself food* Sasha: *her sitting down to eat the food in the dark alone* Location of scene: Northeast high school Sasha: "bye guys see you tomorrow" Location of scene: Sasha's neighborhood Sasha: *walking home* Sasha...
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